diff --git a/xml/source/snippets/offerte/en/teamandreporting.xml b/xml/source/snippets/offerte/en/teamandreporting.xml
index 93c2977..5f6c935 100644
--- a/xml/source/snippets/offerte/en/teamandreporting.xml
+++ b/xml/source/snippets/offerte/en/teamandreporting.xml
@@ -12,8 +12,7 @@
                         <li><client_poc1/> (<client_short/>)</li>
                 </ul>
                 <!-- remove this for non pentesting offers-->
-                <p>Our penetration tests are run a bit like a Capture The Flag 
-                (CTF) competition:
+                <p>The workflow of our penetration testing team is modeled on that of a Capture The Flag (CTF) competition:
                 <!-- remove this for non pentesting offers-->
                 
 				<company_long/> has a geographically distributed team 
diff --git a/xml/source/snippets/offerte/nl/teamandreporting.xml b/xml/source/snippets/offerte/nl/teamandreporting.xml
index 0747930..cbfe084 100644
--- a/xml/source/snippets/offerte/nl/teamandreporting.xml
+++ b/xml/source/snippets/offerte/nl/teamandreporting.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
                         <li><company_poc1/> (<company_short/>)</li>
                         <li><client_poc1/> (<client_short/>)</li>
                 </ul>
-                <p>Onze penetratie tests lijken een beetje op een "<i>Capture The Flag</i>-competitie":
+                <p>De workflow van onze penetratietest-teams is gemodelleerd op die van teams tijdens een "<i>Capture The Flag</i>-competitie":
                 
 				<company_long/> heeft een geografisch gedistribueerd team; 
 				 wij gebruiken online infrastructuur (RocketChat, GitLabs, etc.)